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My Sister
Contributed by
untitled
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Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 03:42:15 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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My sister was an idol to me
she was the everything I wanted to be
Even with her smashing and crashing
I held my tongue, so no back lashing
When she yelled I just looked on
I didnt listen when they said it was wrong
She was my sister and I loved her so
it was always yes and never no.
When she went away I thought I was sad
then I heard of all the bad
and as time went on I came to see
she was the last thing I wanted to be
I convenced myself I had no sister
so people never asked if I ever missed her
I transformed into something, or somone else.
my heart was changed, from one that melts
To a hard, hating souless being
that hated mostly everything
Then I day I saw her again
she was free from her prison pen
and when she saw what I had become
she also saw what she had done
for the first time I had a sister
and she didnt mind if I hadnt missed her
I found the forgivness I thought I didnt need
and the hate that filled my heart, was finally emptied.
To my Sister
I had alot to learn
thanks for being so patient.
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Re: My Sister
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by SaintzAndSinnerz on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 05:56:42 PM AEST
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| This was a very touching poem. i enjoyed it, good job. |
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Re: My Sister
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by heatherslostdreams on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 06:55:47 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this poem it had lots of raw emotion in it. I feel like I can relate to this situation with your sister but apply it with my mother. Very good write. Sounds as something that I might write myself.
Your friend, heather |
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