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There Goes My Baby
Contributed by
Darkangelpoet07
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Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 12:26:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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"There goes my baby." He says as he points out his girlfriend to all his friends.
"There goes my baby." He says to himself as he watches her walk down the isle.
"There goes my baby." He thinks as he watches her sleep with his little girl in her arms.
Years pass and memories are born. Problems are solved and hard times are put in the past.
Finally one day with tears in his eyes he says, "There goes my baby." As she fades away.
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Re: There Goes My Baby
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by maestar on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 02:33:09 PM AEST
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really sad, starts off very nicely and then turns into something worth crying about. boohoo.
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Re: There Goes My Baby
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by darkknight88 on
Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 11:11:35 AM AEST
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hey i really liked this one its really sad if u actually think about the content. i wish i still had someone that i can point out to all my friends and say there goes my baby. but i havent been lucky i guess!!! ur poem is awesome.
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