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A Heartfelt Sigh
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 11:27:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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" A Heartfelt Sigh "
I was not with you to say good-bye
now I am left to live and to cry
deep in my heart your name is traced
etched for eternity to never be erased
As I now sit here where you now lay
I silently cried and started to pray
god, please watch over this love of mine
I hope all is well and they are fine
The sky this day is dark and dreary
as though God himself is sad and teary
tears in my eyes A Heartfelt Sigh
I try to whisper my final goodbye
I miss you so much and I feel so sad
I loved and cherished all that we had
When it becomes my day, I’ll be with you
I really miss the beautiful things we used to do
as I leave I kiss your stone and give my love
I look up and I watch my angel rise above
I slowly stood up and put flowers upon the ground
I sadly turned and walked away crying without a sound!!!!!
Penned By James L. McHenry
Copyright © 2007 James L. McHenry
Copyright © 2007 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
Copyright © 2007 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright © 2007 HeartFelt TM
Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion
The Best And Most Beautiful Thing In The World Can’t Be Seen Or Touched
It Must Be Felt With Your Heart
Copyright ©
MickeyPigKnuckles
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2007-02-02 11:27:47]
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Re: A Heartfelt Sigh
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by Bleedthelove on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 11:38:59 AM AEST
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| Such an emotional write, and so very beautifully written. Excellent job. |
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Re: A Heartfelt Sigh
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 12:06:13 PM AEST
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wow this is a beautiful write.. so sad but so emotion filled.. wonderfully done
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: A Heartfelt Sigh
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by boredoms_burden on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 12:51:38 PM AEST
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| great poem i enjoyed how you walked us through what you were feeling, exellent! |
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Re: A Heartfelt Sigh
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by lilbit9494 on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 01:24:52 PM AEST
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| I think this is a great write. Whether it was a lost love, or a lost loved one I can relate. I've been there as alot of people have and I know that the hurt of someone's passing never goes away especially someone you were so close to. You will always think about that person, and they will always still be with you. once again great write, and very touching. - teresa aka lilbit9494 |
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Re: A Heartfelt Sigh
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by heatherslostdreams on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 07:00:04 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem, it touched me as we all lose love ones or someone we loved. Whether it be to the grave or to life we all have this feeling at some point in letting something go that we cherished so much. You grabbed my attention with your words and I love reading your work. Thank you keep it coming.
Your friend,
Heather
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heatherslostdreams |
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Re: A Heartfelt Sigh
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by Alison on
Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 02:19:23 PM AEST
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| so sad but still with some hope left! powerful and moving write. wonderful job |
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Re: A Heartfelt Sigh
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by europeanprincess on
Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 05:56:06 PM AEST
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| poem was good and it is sad. i will keep reading this one not yet the one...... thank you for sharing. |
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Re: A Heartfelt Sigh
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 11:59:21 PM AEST
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Something about your writes that make me say
WOW
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