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The beauty I see in her
Contributed by
girish
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Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 07:19:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Beauty as the female deer is she
This maiden has a relation with me
Tender is the water from coconut
And on me the same she does squirt
Black as the clouds spreads her hairs
The same does the waves from sea bears
The more love that comes from her tone
My mind carries the same in my intone
The flowers that give such aroma
Mingles with the honey in panorama
Such is the delight that really springs
When our minds in union clings
Her hands should become the prison
In which I lay myself for all frozen
This should happen all through my life
For which reason she has become my wife
Even in solitude I have no yearning
Her youth plays the part of delighting
Which brings, the beauty ardent in her
That is only for me, now and forever
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2007-02-02 07:19:41]
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Re: The beauty I see in her
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 09:19:21 AM AEST
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beautifully written.. this is a very enjoyable piece of work.. great job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: The beauty I see in her
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by Packatack on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 11:08:58 AM AEST
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| What a great poem u wrote here. Thanks for sharing! |
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Re: The beauty I see in her
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by heatherslostdreams on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 07:04:13 PM AEST
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This poem is beautiful and full of love thank you for sharing and not being afraid to put your feelings out there like many are. Great Write.
your friend
Heather
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heatherslostdreams
P.S. thanks for the comment on my poem glad that i could return the favor! |
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