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Scattered Thoughts
Contributed by
kidnic
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Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 02:50:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Like morning dew glistening in the light,
Or star-spun constellations from a winter's night,
My thoughts are scattered, like dust to the wind,
Looking for purchase, or maybe a friend.
Wandering through hills covered with splendor
I think not of the beauty, but only of labor.
This heart would cry, if it had only a voice,
With years left behind me, there's no room for rejoice.
Hope becomes tangible, something to hold;
You wait, and wait, until finally you're told
It's all for nothing, only a worthless trinket;
So falling to the ground, I resign and submit.
I'd cry real tears, if I knew what they're for;
Instead I have no idea why my heart is so sore.
Is it all the beauty creating nothing but pain,
Or the sadness that lingers after disdain?
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2007-02-02 02:50:01]
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Re: Scattered Thoughts
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 03:04:23 AM AEST
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I think you've written a really beautiful poem.
I guess it's all a period of time in our lives which we are all familiar with...
cheers,
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Re: Scattered Thoughts
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by trulovaAKAthetruth on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 03:15:45 AM AEST
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good poem rhymes well
Your friend,
brotha luv |
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Re: Scattered Thoughts
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 05:04:27 AM AEST
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| Great poem , nice flow to it. |
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Re: Scattered Thoughts
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 09:23:50 AM AEST
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this is a very powerful and emotional write.. everyone can relate to this at some points in their lives.. its horrid to be confused or not be able to find your clarity when you need it most.. I really enjoyed this piece great job
vampyress Jenni |
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