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MY ONE LAST DREAM: I hope it last forever
Contributed by
heatherslostdreams
on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 11:40:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I think
I dream
I hope
I wish
Of you
Everyday
The only thought
The only dream
The only hope
The only wish
To be by your side
The best thought
The best dream
The best hope
The best wish
The only best is with you
The greatest tears
The lost fears
The most perfect
Off the wall circuit
The unconditional love
Pure and true as a lonesome dove
Continues and stays in my heart for you
All my dreams come true
The moment I looked into your eyes
Was when I learned loneliness dies
So now in my heart I will hold you dear
And now I'm with you and we're happy together
MY ONE LAST DREAM: I HOPE IT LAST FOREVER!!!
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2007-02-01 23:40:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: MY ONE LAST DREAM: I hope it last forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by girish on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 07:27:27 AM AEST (User
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live for love
but don`t love to live
read my love poems
thansk for sharing
girish |
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Re: MY ONE LAST DREAM: I hope it last forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 09:27:42 AM AEST (User
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wow beautifully written.. very straight forward and I like the raw straightforward feelings.. how many times we often think we are dreaming when something is good.. beauitful write..
vampyress jenni |
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Re: MY ONE LAST DREAM: I hope it last forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 10:09:26 AM AEST (User
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heatherslostdreams, This warm message of love was orchestrated beautifully into a living picture of art that your readers can clearly see as they feel the strong emotional componet pulling them into you as the gifted author. Very well done.
Mickey Pig Knuckles :) |
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