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MAD RUSH.
Contributed by
FRANCO
on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 09:09:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Burning summer morning,
in midst of a chaotic traffic-haste
confused wheelers mad rush chasing
dreams of mortal destiny.
Is a fortune out somewhere there
that I’m naive about? Throttling my wheels
Sprinted behind these dream chasers towards
a world mysterious to me.
By our own polluted gloomy smolder blinding the
vision of truth, zigzagging through and between
the gigantic wheelers, one fell with a thud in front of me
crushing his dream filled skull to death.
Lying drowned within his red-fluid alone and helpless; in this world
of self-centered race, sightless to see – the truth just prevailed beneath.
-FRANCO-
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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2007-02-01 09:09:35]
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Re: MAD RUSH.
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by BornReckless on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 01:30:36 PM AEST
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| this poem is kinda morbid..."crushing his dream filled skull to death"...and "drowned within his red fluid"...twisted but creative. nice job |
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Re: MAD RUSH.
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 03:33:35 PM AEST
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Bravo, tight, bloody excellent, terse write. Upon reading I enter the Ashram and take vows to be silent and humble the rest of my days to at least meet my maker half-way with eyes open wide.
Or so it feels. Well Done
Peace
Yangdantien |
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