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Let Me In

Contributed by heatherslostdreams on Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 09:33:47 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I'm not like you
I'm not out to hurt you only love you
I would sacrifice my soul to save you
For you my world stands still
I wish I could change your past
And steal all your pain
Until all you feel is love
Hurt is like a demon that hunts you down
And steals away your every meaning
It holds you from happiness
It holds you from love
It holds you from moving on
And your stuck in pain like purigatory
Your at a war with who you are and who you want to be
No matter how you try your pain will be apart of you
But with it you can continue
You can't live in misery
And expect me to live in it with you
You desire everything I do
And i want to be your strength
And hold you up when your down
You and I arent so different
Yet we are one in the same
I've been down that road
But you must dig deep and find yourself
And realize that this road doesn't have to be a lonely one
I'm here to be your other half
Be your strength
Be your shield
I will protect you from all wrong
As long as you let me

By: Heather Dixon

Copyright © heatherslostdreams ... [ 2007-01-31 21:33:47]
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Re: Let Me In (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 11:21:34 PM AEST
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heatherslostdreams, wow somehow you have reached right out and pulled me into you through this awesome poem to feel the emotions. What a powerful insight as the image became clear within my minds eye to capture a beautiful vision of warm beauty. I applaud you for a poem so wonderfully composed and before I close this comment I would ask that you continue to let your pens ink flow across sheets of paper into words of living art so they jump right out at your readers and gently touch their emotional part. Beautiful poem.
Mickey Pig Knuckles :)

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