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My Heart's Voice
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 08:13:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Can you hear my heart's voice crying
out for you,some time's so afraid am
i yet nothing can i do.
Lying here amidst the dark soon i'll
leave this earth, perhaps you'll hear
my heart's voice from underneath the
dirt.
Look upon my tombstone 'tis there
you'll read this rhyme,perhaps one
day we'll meet again another life
and time.
Oh listen to my heart's voice and you
will always know, where ever death may
take me i'll still love you so.
Forever it will tell you your the one
that i adore, so willingly i'd love you
should we pass this way once more.
myheartsvoice
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Re: My Heart's Voice
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by ell_03 on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 08:31:20 PM AEST
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normally i only like rhyming poems but this was really good! i have some poems about death feel free to read and comment on them.
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Re: My Heart's Voice
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 09:36:58 PM AEST
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I know you posted this under dark poetry, but dang it!
It could very well have been in the "love or romantic"
category, because this is definitely laden with that
tone, my friend. And beautifully so!
A lovely pledge of devotion long after this life is through.
good stuff!
~Breezy
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Re: My Heart's Voice
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 04:46:11 PM AEST
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My friend I guess i find myself totally agreeing with my dear friend Breezy on this one~ A pledge of love forevermore~
Wonderfully penned. Thanks for sharing it with us.
big hugs,
sue m |
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