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Heartstrings and Phone Lines
Contributed by
britanna_rose
on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 08:07:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The miles between us can't tear us apart.
Though I can't see your face, you're here in my heart.
If I may steal some words from our favorite song;
You've been far away for far too long.
Without you in my arms, I fall to pieces.
Without the touch of your hand, my heartbeat ceases.
Our love is unending, strong, and true.
So I'll patiently wait 'til I can be with you.
With our only connection heartstrings and phone lines,
It's hard to believe that you're truly mine.
I must hear your voice each day to survive.
For without your "I love you"'s, I don't feel alive.
You go out with your friends and wonder why I'm sad.
I guess you don't see that I miss you so bad.
A puddle of tears grows at my feet.
I remember your kiss and my heart skips a beat.
One night without you and I'm drowning in tears,
But sleep will not come 'til your voice I can hear.
I can't live without you, can't breathe without you.
I can't sleep without you, so I'll dream about you.
I imagine you're beside me, and you gently kiss my lips.
You wrap your arms around me, and touch me with your fingertips.
A wave of bliss devours me, as I give in to your touch.
You disappear in my arms, and now I miss you so much.
Can you see now why I'm crying, drowning, and dying?
Can't you see that it's your love for which I am pining?
One night without you and I nearly die.
I hope you understand now, and don't ask why I cry.
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Re: Heartstrings and Phone Lines
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by allymp on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 09:52:47 PM AEST
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I find that one of the most important parts of writting is the title because that is what first catches the reader, and i adore the title(as well as the rest of the poem).
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Re: Heartstrings and Phone Lines
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by allymp on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 09:52:52 PM AEST
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I find that one of the most important parts of writting is the title because that is what first catches the reader, and i adore the title(as well as the rest of the poem).
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Re: Heartstrings and Phone Lines
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 11:32:32 PM AEST
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britanna_rose, now this is a beautiful poem of love that will blossom. I really enjoy your glowing style as the words you have painted for your readers come to life and create a picture of beauty. Thank you for giving us all a little of you and especially your wonderful poetic talent. Each time that you reach for your poetic pen, you must know your readers are bearing a warm grin. Wonderful Poem.
Mickey Pig Knuckles :) |
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