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Remember Stone
Contributed by
crow
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Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 07:51:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Remember hands
dust from the day,
nothing never un-fixible.
Fancy" frills,
daddys and little girls
the savage,
if they held my hand to long..
I remember the world was narrow"
and pointed at me,
the giant I stood behind.
Nights you were gone,
promises to sleep on,
"I have your favorite shirt,
you never could find.
I remember your passion
when lights burnt low,
trying to find love,
with the words you wrote.
I have found the Remember Stone"
wish you here,
I`am still that little girl ...
K.C. and Me..
[for every Father, and little girl] K.C. Vincent/ and me.
Copyright ©
crow
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2007-01-31 19:51:44]
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Re: Remember Stone
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 09:39:58 PM AEST
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lovely sentiments captured here, my friend. And so
softly comforting, the words ..
makes me feel a bit sad, somehow .. there are so
many that don't have the bond they should, or could.
This was beautiful. Thanks for sharing it. :)
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Re: Remember Stone
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by shelby on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 11:53:26 AM AEST
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This is beautiful glad it is back in full bloom, hee hee.
K you have great talent just like your dad, keep that pen singing it is a gift.
Love ya both
huggers
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Remember Stone
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 04:13:03 PM AEST
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Wonderful, heart touching piece of writing you two have come up with. *wink* Thanks for sharing this.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Remember Stone
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 06:16:09 PM AEST
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A beautiful, moving and heartfelt write. May the beautiful bond you share as father & daughter never be broken my dear friend.
Your daughter is talented just like her dad. A beautiful touching poem thanks so much for sharing it with us~
love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Remember Stone
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by MisfitMe on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 11:11:51 PM AEST
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How incredibly precious...my own daughter & I, share the connectiveness & respect for each other as writers...this brings it all home for me, thank you!!!
Incredibly Precious!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace
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Re: Remember Stone
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 03:59:43 PM AEST
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I imagine this piece as a conversation whispered between Father & Daughter on the dance floor at the reception. Beautiful embraces blurred by tears of love.
Bravo
Peace
Yangdantien |
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