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Walking into {Nothing ♥}
Contributed by
naughtygurl
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Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 05:46:11 PM in AEST
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In the darkest times to mourn
And underneath a blood red moon
The shadows dance into the night,
Killing all that I care for,
All that I’ll die for
In a summer shade to the next turn of a leaf
I guess its time to leave..
Its so hard to tell you, that I’m the one who gave up on you.
If it wasn’t such a weakness
I could scream into forever
Somehow wish for never
Turn around to make the same mistakes
Oh how I wish,
I wish these memories I could erase.
But ill just keep on walking,
Into the empty place.
So you say its really me,
I’m the cause of your diseases
Such an illness ,preserved for me
What a sickness, What a liar
Can’t you see your crippling me
Its so hard to tell you , that I hate you , but I do
If it wasn’t such a weakness
I could scream into forever
Somehow wish for never
Turn around to make the same mistakes
Oh how I wish,
I wish these memories I could erase.
But ill just keep on walking,
Into the empty place.
So this is my last breath I give
I no longer choose to grieve,
Just kill me
KILL ME!
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naughtygurl
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2007-01-31 17:46:11]
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Re: Walking into {Nothing ♥}
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 06:08:45 PM AEST
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naughtygurl, I was so pulled into you through your glowing talent and the emotional power of this wonderful piece. I want to thank you for sharing your love of poetic literature and especially for giving us all a little of you. I found myself savoring each and every word as the emotional content was dripping with such a passion rarely unfelt as a reader. I would hope to see you with your writing pen as the ink flows across sheets of paper as I myself eagerly await your next poetic caper.
Mickey Pig Knuckles :) |
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Re: Walking into {Nothing ♥}
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 06:17:51 PM AEST
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very deep and full of emotional.. great expression in this..
vampyress Jenni |
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