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Addiction
Contributed by
nirvana12
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Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 05:29:33 PM in AEST
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drugabuse
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I've got lungs made of coal, that is what it feels like and every time I take a breath it makes me want to die./
It beats me every night and throughout all the day. No matter what I try to do I just can't get away.
Listen to my coughs scream out and think of my throat sore. I would love to stop but I guess I love them more.
One day I will die from this addiction, it makes me feel a little better to believe this is fiction.
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Re: Addiction
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by Naughtygurl on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 05:53:57 PM AEST
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I LOVE EVERYTHING:
except the last line its a little different in my opinion.
Anyway keep trying
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Re: Addiction
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 05:57:40 PM AEST
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nirvana12, drug addiction is a bad thing no matter how positive all users try and make it out to be. I really enjoyed your poem surrounding this dilemma for all walks of life. Thank you for sharing.
Mickey Pig Knuckles |
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