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Tradedy
Contributed by
Bon
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Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 04:12:55 PM in AEST
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Scenes of tragedy flash by and never seem to stop,
the world keeps spinning like a quickly revolving top.
Murder, torture, war, all kinds of crime,
it never stops, we are running out of time.
Blood and tears, everywhere there is pain,
sorrows fall down like the pouring rain.
Life quickly passes, just another one down,
when swimming in our miseries, eventually we will drown.
Copyright ©
Bon
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2007-01-31 16:12:55]
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Re: Tradedy
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 05:39:27 PM AEST
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Bon, you have created a very current reflection of reality which is very well done. Thank you for sharing yourself and your talents with us all.
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Re: Tradedy
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by Nirvana12 on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 05:41:27 PM AEST
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| Dude, I love it. It is amazing. |
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Re: Tradedy
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by Naughtygurl on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 05:48:54 PM AEST
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very deep?
oh yes and i dont mean to be rude but did you mean Tragedy?
-->Bitty ♥ |
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Re: Tradedy
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by SaintzAndSinnerz on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 06:20:33 PM AEST
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| You did a good job of capturing reality and the world. makes me think about the world today. nice write. |
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Re: Tradedy
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 06:20:43 PM AEST
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i would say this is a wise write on how the world truly is.. its a sickening place.. wonderful write..
Vampyress Jenni |
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