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Lowliness
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
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Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 01:51:20 PM in AEST
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Lowliness a place within
known all to well
its dark again
uncertainty sets in
questioning the reasons of how you lost it all
answers seeping through
dancing around thoughts
lost into the moment
reality sets its course
you come to the realization
that nothings what it seems
Vampyress Jenni
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Phantomvampyress
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2007-01-31 13:51:20]
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Re: Lowliness
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 02:21:36 PM AEST
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Phantomvampyress, you may not like what you have done here but let me reassure you that this readers savors it. Anything from you is a treasure and always my reading pleasure. It reminds me of one of mine titled, "Total Voidness" which will be posted here at some point as only having the opportunity to post one poem a day may take some time. Once again, thank you for giving us all just a little more of you and your awesome gift of words of art.
Mickey Pig Knuckles :) |
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Re: Lowliness
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 07:30:02 PM AEST
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| beautiful words of truth, I like that. Crow |
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Re: Lowliness
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 09:58:53 PM AEST
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very profound and ponderous musing, Jenni.
It's cleansing and good for the soul to ponder such
things, sometimes, methinks. Even better to voice them
of write them down in such a poetic fashion.
Great post!!
~Breezy |
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Re: Lowliness
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 12:23:01 PM AEST
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" you come to the realization
that nothings what it seems " and on that note i'll simply say, Truly beautiful, and truly true. Again you nailed it, couldn't have put it better my self, you do have the nack for telling it like it is. Great peice of writting kiddo. You deffinately get 5 stars for this one.
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Re: Lowliness
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 02:26:03 PM AEST
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Short and sweet and gets its point across well.
I don't see why you don't like it
Steve |
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Re: Lowliness
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 04:21:09 PM AEST
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Good soulful write, Jen.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Lowliness
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 05:37:14 PM AEST
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JenStar~ Girl you certainly know how to get your thoughts outta your head and onto the page. A deep soulful write expressed so well.
I have come to love visting your pages my dear friend. I'm never disappointed with their contents. Well done.
love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Lowliness
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by europeanprincess on
Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 06:03:47 PM AEST
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| i loved this. ~reality~ does set its course. how true to this. thank you for sharing. |
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