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Die Young
Contributed by
shinji_kusa
on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 12:03:00 PM in AEST
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Why is it,
That the world doesn’t make sense,
Here you die,
As the floral fragrance,
I lean over you,
As you take your last breath,
Kiss your lips,
As you lay back down,
The next moment,
Your dead,
In your bed of flowers,
The angel cries,
As he takes your powers,
You grow cold,
As I dig your grave,
So ends a life,
That was never made.
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2007-01-31 12:03:00]
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Re: Die Young
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 01:18:11 PM AEST
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shinji_kusa, I really enjoyed the message within this awesome composure. Your talent is glowing brightly. The part that really touched me was the closing, " So ends a life, That was never made." How true and sad all in the same breath. Thank you for giving us all a little of yourself and your wonderful gift of poetry.
Mickey Pig Knuckles :)
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Re: Die Young
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 01:29:39 PM AEST
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Very vivid and a talented work indeed.
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