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i'm not her anymore
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 11:39:14 AM in AEST
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i'm not her anymore..
i'm not the one crying on the floor...
i'm not her today
i'm better this way...
i learned to love again
realizing hate is not a sin..
cuz all i feel for you is anger and pain.
and learning to dance in the pouring rain..
i'm not her anymore,
i'm not standing begging at the door
i'm not her today
i've said all i have to say..
i don't look for you in another eyes
don't listen for those same old lies
i love freely and open, i am complete
i only have one thing left to do,,, you memory i must delete.
i'm not here anymore
i'm not listening to you snore
i'm not here today
i'm just me, and nothing more to say
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2007-01-31 11:39:14]
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Re: i'm not her anymore
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 11:44:05 AM AEST
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brokenwings, I really enjoy this type of poetry as one finds a way to rise above the pit falls of life and bounce back a much better stronger person. Now its time I thank you for sharing your wonderful talent and for giving us a little more of you through your gift of poetry.
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Re: i'm not her anymore
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 01:13:48 PM AEST
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wow i really like the style of this.. this is a beautifully inspiring piece for all of those who feel broken and rise above.. I can relate to this. i think everyone feels this way at times and you put into words a great way to over come hurt and pain.. very well done
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Re: i'm not her anymore
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 01:31:48 PM AEST
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Full of hope, strength in each line. Gives all who read a power up!! Yes keep going and just be you, nothing else matters for if you lose yourself where will you be??
~Michelle~ |
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Re: i'm not her anymore
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by seafire on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 10:05:13 PM AEST
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i really liked this poem it was great i hope someday to write as good as some of you guys wow you are awesome thanks for this poem it was really good
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Re: i'm not her anymore
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 01:10:13 AM AEST
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i love the strength you found in you, beautiful expression of feeling...
love n' hugs nessa
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