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Stalker
Contributed by
SugarCoatedSweetness
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Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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You're Everywhere
Every Place I Go You're There
Behind The Bushes With A Sly Stare
And Without A Care
This I Can No Longer Bare
Was This Stalking A Dare
In The Night Black Clothes You Wear
Hidding In The Smoke Filled Air
With A Wig Not Your Own Hair
At Your Side Binoculars You Have A Pair
Notes You Take Then Rip And Tear
I See Your Face And This Is Rare
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2003-02-21 22:20:00]
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Re: Stalker
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by plous on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 10:57:24 PM AEST
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| i cant pick up if you are scared, angry or interested in this but the piece itself is put together very well. |
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Re: Stalker
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by Percursors on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 01:19:48 AM AEST
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| I think this piece is really good u use great descriptive words that gave me a real nice feel on what was going on and that’s rare! I also took the poem as being more paranoid not really scared, angry or interested but just more of the feeling someone’s watching you when no ones there or seeing something outta the corner of your eye...but all in all it was good. |
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Re: Stalker
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:54:29 PM AEST
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| interesting. |
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