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MY ULTIMATE DEPRESSION
Contributed by
trialnerror
on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 08:06:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am hurt, I am sad
I am used to it
It’s not that bad
It’s part of my ultimate depression
These poems I write
Are due to a struggle
I try to win the fight
To conquer my ultimate depression
It’s painful to feel
The knives thrashing my body
In order to seal,
My life in a box of ultimate depression
One person alone
Can end this misery of mine
With her voice and her tone
She can save me from my ultimate depression
Talk to me and say,
That you love me
So I can slay
My ultimate depression
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trialnerror
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2007-01-31 08:06:07]
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Re: MY ULTIMATE DEPRESSION
(User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 11:27:02 AM AEST
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trialnerror, what a realistic poem you have created here that many can relate to within our current society. One right person can change a life but sometimes it takes so long. Thanks for sharing a little of yourself and your talent with us all.
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Re: MY ULTIMATE DEPRESSION
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 11:27:30 AM AEST
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trialnerror, what a realistic poem you have created here that many can relate to within our current society. One right person can change a life but sometimes it takes so long. Thanks for sharing a little of yourself and your talent with us all.
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