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The Vote
Contributed by
trulovaAKAthetruth
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Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 02:56:44 AM in AEST
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The war rages
Stand alone amongst countless millions
Now there is no other reality
Only reality
We live sublimely blinded by the flesh
I cant stand the pain
Yes or no
There is a required answer
Is no longer simple
Must we have to lose
I'm like all others
Scared of the commitment
Of the question
Few have the faith to submit
Cant let go of this retched world
Why is it so important
Instant gratifications are all we're seeking
Cant anyone truely understand the magnitude
Of what I speak
Not only is this proficy
Its deep
Thomas Wayne Hart Jr.
AKA
THE TRUTH
Copyright ©
trulovaAKAthetruth
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2007-01-31 02:56:44]
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Re: The Vote
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by joe-joe on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 09:26:42 AM AEST
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| Truly a great write, for there is a great war of our flesh, but the good thing is that if we truly want to over come it, we can through Christ...great write... |
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Re: The Vote
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 11:57:56 AM AEST
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trulovaAKAthetruth, Yes in deen the battle rages on as i applaud you for a very interesting poem. Thank you for giving us a part of you and for sharing your wonderful talent.
Mickey Pig Knuckles |
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Re: The Vote
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by redsleeve on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 07:13:06 AM AEST
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| good write |
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