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THE BLAME
Contributed by
seafire
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Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 11:07:23 PM in AEST
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OUT of love i take the blame,
so you wont have any pain,
just point the finger at me,
i will take all the shame.
my child i love you
i know you don't understand
why i take the blame,
its so you won't know any pain.
mare
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2007-01-30 23:07:23]
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Re: THE BLAME
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 11:41:28 PM AEST
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| I do understand this write, we try so hard to protect them. good write...Crow |
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Re: THE BLAME
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 11:16:00 AM AEST
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wow this is a short write but very powerful.. i know what your talking about.. I am impressed with this write.. its very well done.. YAY!! a good one from you. I told you if you really put heart into your work it will come out better..
your favorite and only daughter lolz
vampyress Jenni =D |
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Re: THE BLAME
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 07:37:24 AM AEST
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| good overall. |
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Re: THE BLAME
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 04:40:31 PM AEST
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I think any Mom or Dad, or other significant adult in a child's life can understand this Mare. Sometimes brevity in a write is good, so it seems quite finished to me. Good thoughts. I am glad to see you writing and expressing yourself here.
*big hugs*
Peace, Laura |
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