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dancing dark minds
Contributed by
ferasdour
on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 06:31:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i see you walking within your mind
nothing, this beauty defies
outside desides
the life thats seen
her beauty i do declare
electronic despair
rationalized by humanoid means
with nothing more for me
others still not to see
riddles processed with the machine
light into your mind i see with wonder
disaster's explict fear held under
like in prier thoughts seen
your extoplasm's dream seams
lacking thoughts forseen
other worlds we praize within kind
virtual simulations
explore dancing dark minds
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ferasdour
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2007-01-30 18:31:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: dancing dark minds
(User Rating: 1 ) by lk on
Saturday, 31st October 2009 @ 12:26:06 PM AEST (User
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i really like this poem: some words ryme and also, it has a depth that i enjoy. good job |
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