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Underneath Her Skin
Contributed by
bluestars
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Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 05:34:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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She sits outside
and starts to write,
to a love that she tries to erase
but can't escape.
To learn that he has found
someone new
hurts her bleeding heart,
for he has made
a profound mark,
underneath her skin.
And even though
time has moved along,
she still sits and awaits
his return,
for his warm embrace
still lingers...
underneath her skin.
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bluestars
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2007-01-30 17:34:18]
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Re: Underneath Her Skin
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 05:58:49 PM AEST
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a beautiful write.. I loved the wording and the flow and the expression.. great job
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Re: Underneath Her Skin
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 07:44:00 PM AEST
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You made the reader see and feel your words , nicely done
Michelle |
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Re: Underneath Her Skin
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by Ratwick on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 02:03:04 AM AEST
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Isn't it crap how love lingers long after the lover is gone? Such a gyp.
Really good write!!!
Write On
Peace |
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Re: Underneath Her Skin
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 12:46:45 PM AEST
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beautiful...
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Underneath Her Skin
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by beefybeebuzz on
Saturday, 15th December 2007 @ 07:05:08 AM AEST
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| I like the way i could imagine what you wrote i felt the emotion GOOD WORK! |
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Re: Underneath Her Skin
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by CharM on
Wednesday, 1st May 2013 @ 07:11:46 PM AEST
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| nicely written. gave me goosebumps. =) |
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