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Silent Apology
Contributed by
sunnygal
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Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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I'm coming to you in silence with understanding in my heart.
That what I did in the past, my actions was what pulled us apart.
I'm sorry for hurting you, and I truely hope you see, I'm hurting here watching you and I know it's because of me.
So I'm asking for your forgiveness, and I know I may have to wait. But hopefully knowing I'm sorry can let some of the hurt ESCAPE
Copyright ©
sunnygal
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2003-02-21 21:20:00]
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Re: Silent Apology
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by WordPoet on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 03:29:45 PM AEST
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Words are not so important as is a repentant heart. This will shine through and make ultimately more evident your true emotions than any words could ever hope to convey.
The underlying honesty and depth of emotion make this a fine piece of writing.
Nice write. |
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Re: Silent Apology
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 09:58:17 PM AEST
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| apologies are hard to bring together and are hard not to do... even if you are bitter with someone ... something in you feels guilt or melancoly for what was done and what is now... apologies can someone really be sorry for doing something... or is it just a cultural idea... sometimes you say sorry for the slightest things but do you actually mean what you say??? yet putting them in words often prove to the other that your feelings are in repentance and are tryin to atone ... |
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Re: Silent Apology
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by Chaos666 on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 07:17:10 PM AEST
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| I've been through a lot in relationships, and screwed up a lot too!! This piece summarizes a lot of the feelings I have had in the past........excellent write! |
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Re: Silent Apology
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by fallensilence on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 09:12:06 PM AEST
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| WOW! what can i say that hasn't already been said....well this is a really amazing poem, i especially love the title but the poem was also very good. -david |
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