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i miss her
Contributed by
nightwolf
on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 11:31:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i lay in my bed
missing my wife
i dont care what she did
i want her back in my life
through all that she did
i still cant stay mad
she's everything to me
i want her so bad
i love her, i need her
i cant live without her
i breath her, i dream her
my whole worlds about her
will she leave him for me
i hope and i wish
but if i see him
i will gut him like a fish
i dont know what kind of person
would take a mans wife
put him on the street
and mess up his life
how does he sleep at night
does he have no shame
sleeps with a married woman
and her husbands in pain
i just want i wife back
to hold her and kiss her
through all yhat she did
i still love her and miss her
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2007-01-30 11:31:29]
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Re: i miss her
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by JoeyTrib1550 on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 12:37:15 PM AEST
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You expressed your feelings well in this
good job
keep it up |
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Re: i miss her
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 01:42:08 PM AEST
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wow this is so sad.. it makes me want to cry.. this is a well expressed poem.. just remember though .. its not just that mans fault she left you.. she chose to do that.. sometimes its hard to accept that but she took part in the cheating also.. very well expressed
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Re: i miss her
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by mylady on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 09:52:58 PM AEST
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| It sad wanting some one that dosen't want you it better to move on... Poem was nice & sad . good luck |
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