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The Embroidery
Contributed by
livvy20
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Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 09:02:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
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There's an embroidery on a tapestry
Deep down under the sea
It sits there and it sews there
And it talks of you and me
As it toils through that tapestry
Far away from the sun
It twines and tangles and wonders
On how we both are one
It travels though those fibers
Hidden away from the sun
And it marvels and it ponders
on how tight our souls our spun
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2007-01-30 09:02:26]
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Re: The Embroidery
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by LouisaMontagu on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 09:38:52 AM AEST
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Hmm descriptive,
feel free to read my other poems if you like creativity. |
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Re: The Embroidery
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 11:11:47 AM AEST
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livvy20, I must say this is very creative and the message is awesome as I clearly see a very gifted poet with a glowing talent. Through this poem you have reached right out to grasp your reader and pull them into you for a very vivid emotional journey of deep meaning. Great Job. Please. do not ever consider placing your poetic pen down as your readers would miss you while bearing a frown.
Mickey Pig Knuckles :) |
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