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Do What We Came to Do
Contributed by
mangos
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Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 07:04:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I once fell off the edge of the world
Held the mountains and valleys in the palm of my hands
Made a splash in the ocean which carried the killer wave
A cloud strategically placed, made specifically to cool me with its shade
On the ride, on the way up, on the balcony stairs
Kissing in the dark, is where we begin, is where we should have stayed
Never entering the looming bedroom, the chambers of which, dreams are made
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mangos
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2007-01-30 07:04:31]
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Re: Do What We Came to Do
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 07:23:22 AM AEST
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Short and simple yet full of meaning.. This was a great poem.. I liked the flow... Well done..
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Re: Do What We Came to Do
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by LouisaMontagu on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 09:04:41 AM AEST
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Wow, short and sweet but totally pulled me in.
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