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(The Title is Too Big to Put Here)
Contributed by
skyhawk432
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Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 05:27:20 PM in AEST
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"Fifty Negative Minutes Combined Briskly with Eighty Positive Minutes at the Strands of Phantasmagoria"
[ 1st TACET
Upon genuine classroom articles,
double digits pull their teeth out
to the iron-curtain structures
of swallowing Liberty-ful novels.
Internal chatter shatters the null-sounds;
projecting inner transmissions
about the log-chewing symptoms
of Actions Carrying Terrorism.
2nd TACET
A desk converses with the square-tiled floor
while waves from mechanical gills
spill anti-cyanide breakfast
for the respiratory birds beneath.
During compulsive eating of novels,
one brittle bird squawks Bronchitis.
Another bathes in Surreal form;
watching images on clean, lucid screens.
3rd TACET
A stubby sausage turns a dead tree sheet
before the daring dictator
(the Cage was badly feared by John)
swallows the systematical silence ]
"Whole."
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Re: (The Title is Too Big to Put Here)
(User Rating: 1 ) by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 11:50:23 AM AEST (User
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An a tonal composition of an excellent concerto perhaps for many instruments to attempt. The dance of language is right up my I alley. I loved this. It reminded me of being a student looking out the window at world rushing by as the syrup of time slows on the clock behind the teacher who just doesn't get it.
Well Done
Peace
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