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Purposeful Abandonment
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 03:52:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Consider the alternatives,
they are not likely to entice or draw you in.
Rather they repel the touch of human skin,
infect the blood, and spread throughout.
Wasted emotions act as catalysts,
as they enhance visions of perceived loveliness,
where none actually emanates,
and ugliness insists on dictating the flow.
Thus, a shared secret is divulged,
while unassuming faces,
pay close attention,
to detail,
without fail,
every time,
they never let go,
they are willing to lay naked and exposed.
Smiles are deceptive,
as true sentiments,
are refrained from making an entrance,
into the conflict,
removed and detached from any relevance,
an investment, with no profit.
In this confused state of oblivion,
the recipient, accepts the costs of the gift,
and is willing to live with the results of his sins,
until they begin to burn him from within,
whereupon, it all begins to shrink.
The purpose of this exercise is twofold;
first, to ensure that all persons have taken the necessary precautions before entry. Secondly, is to simply rehearse their lines.
Any deviation from this original script,
especially when voiced with contempt,
can and will be considered a direct breech of protocol,
thereby alleviating all the suspense,
releasing the dark air,
from the circulation vents,
in essence,
a percolation of chance.
Note; violators will be dealt with stringently,
with no mercy,
treated as hostile enemies,
castrated with envy.
So, the latter is critical,
if anyone is able,
to establish its original intent.
Furthermore, when engaged in the actual event,
rehearsal will prove the redeemer,
as precautions become the nullified consequence.
With no content,
placed out of context,
are stories lined with images,
are endings that have bridged,
satire to adlib,
hanging off cliffs,
of reason and purpose.
___________
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Copyright ©
Jyssvw22
... [
2007-01-29 15:52:51]
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Re: Purposeful Abandonment
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 08:54:52 PM AEST
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Holy heck jyss!!! This whole piece feels like a very angry complaint
directed toward society itself! (and in certain cases, I would be
inclinded to agree).
Your writes are always such a complex and enormous under-
taking of the mind .. not only for you, but for your readers as
well. Bravo for stirring the mind AND the heart ..
the last stanza is so powerful
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Re: Purposeful Abandonment
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by hauntedscorp on
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Simply amazing. There is so much to absorb here, just layers upon layers of depth. This is one of (dozens of) your writes that is just mind blowingly a cut above the rest.
Well done. Well done!!
~Scorp |
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