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say goodbye
Contributed by
angel_facing_judgement
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Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 01:17:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I couldn't chance to see the light, instead I wrote off the pain and ran through the dark. Never meant to run into you
but you were the only thing faster than the pain. Somehow you sliced into me when no one else could, and in the rain
you stood and watched me bleed. By nothing more than graceless disdain I learned to forget if I couldn't hate, and boy,
I loved you. Crystal tears and ruby drops I bled, see the death lights and count on feeling numb, the dying has begun.
Run and fight your blade away, another cut to the soul sustained, another jolt of pain. Rip off another small piece of me and just wait and see, you'll never really know all of me, but boy I loved you. So save your tears and say goodbye, the time has come and I must die, but please boy don't you cry, the time has come and I must say goodbye.
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Re: say goodbye
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by bluestars on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 05:42:29 PM AEST
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Great job in expressing your emotions
in this poem
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Re: say goodbye
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by angel_facing_judgement on
Sunday, 22nd April 2007 @ 06:22:39 AM AEST
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| im commenting on my own poem just to say i dont write to be good i write to express .....thanks to all who realize this |
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