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A Dark Heart Crys
Contributed by
Unholy_Soldier
on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
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I'm an ear without a mouth,
Talk to me, Let it out,
Your words shall never leave my mouth,
I wish to talk you out of suicide,
But my wish was denied,
Now once again I try to find another way,
To deal with what you did that day,
Suicide was your key,
Poetry is mine,
Why couldn't you open up to me,
Let me see the pain inside,
For you I would have gladly died,
But I did that day,
With you I passed away.
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Unholy_Soldier
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2003-02-21 19:40:00]
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Re: A Dark Heart Crys
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by ichiban_girl on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 09:45:32 PM AEST
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beautiful write, I can completely understand where it is you are coming from in this poem.
- Jennifer Robin |
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Re: A Dark Heart Crys
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 03:20:28 PM AEST
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| ooh...this is so, so good...i understand you so much...if you ever want to talk i am just an email away...keep smiling... |
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Re: A Dark Heart Crys
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by Wilder on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 02:08:10 AM AEST
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| I liked this one. It was very simple, but very clear and to the point. The message was passed across perfectly. |
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Re: A Dark Heart Crys
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by Kirby on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 04:33:59 PM AEST
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| I know exactly how you feel. About 2 yrs ago my best guy friend whom i loved dearly killed himself! So this poem tells it srtaight and very good! Don't hesitate to get in touch with me! Love:::Kirby |
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Re: A Dark Heart Crys
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by cryingonmyporch on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 12:45:15 AM AEST
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| I like it really nice keeping writing us more to read. |
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