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The Day I Lost You
Contributed by
bluestars
on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 10:38:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The day I lost you
is a day I will neer forget,
for I never thought you would
put me through all of this *****.
All of the pain and suffering,
All of the dreams we shared
All of the memories went down the drain
All of that love has flown away.
The day I lost you,
I lost my mind
I just can't understand why you left my side,
Why you left it all behind.
The day I lost you,
I fell into tears
and my heart broke in two,
two pieces that I glued for someone new.
The day I lost you
is now long gone.
I no longer await your return,
or your passionate kisses...
because the day I lost you
is the day I found myself.
Copyright ©
bluestars
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2007-01-28 22:38:52]
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Re: The Day I Lost You
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 12:41:11 PM AEST
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through sadness happiness was found...great write:)
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: The Day I Lost You
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by positivelypurple on
Thursday, 26th April 2007 @ 09:13:46 AM AEST
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Very heartfelt and personal...we have all been there. I like the positive spin at the end.
All the best,
Laurel |
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Re: The Day I Lost You
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by CharM on
Wednesday, 1st May 2013 @ 07:18:28 PM AEST
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| pretty emotional - you could definitely feel the sadness thru the words... |
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