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Untitled
Contributed by
blindchoice
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Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 08:37:04 PM in AEST
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As my tears drain away
I realize, that feeling has since changed
And that my memory lacks the surface of your fear
This tainted nightmare of passion and truth
Will forever stay with me until I grow into my youth
And hide in the back of my mind steadily rising with the tears
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2007-01-28 20:37:04]
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Re: Untitled
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by purplestary on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 05:54:07 AM AEST
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| nice write. some peices are better left untitled, but i will make one suggestion. "Tainted Nightmare." i think that would be a fitting title. |
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Re: Untitled
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by Tory on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 12:35:30 PM AEST
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| touching. |
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Re: Untitled
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by Tory on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 12:37:26 PM AEST
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| what about, My Fears! or My biggest fears. My sadness,my pain. |
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Re: Untitled
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by sivadxela on
Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 12:16:28 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this =]
It's haunting and sorrowful.
Great write! |
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