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Consumed.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
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Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 11:09:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She burns like fire off the sun
I come undone
Tasting her lips keeps me on track
She knows her hands belong on my back
And i'll kiss her heart
I'll heal her wounds
She melts into me
Touching me with her fingertips
While words spill out like fire from her lips
Gives me a perfect feeling
It comes on strong
Rights the wrong
Takes control
Purifys the soul
Kinda like this...
Her kiss,
It get's under my skin
Deep Within
And I love her so much..
So much I dont even know where to begin...
The sound of her heart beating
Her beautiful eyes
Keep me hypnotized
Mesmerized
Shes my truth
My fate
So worth the wait
All my love
My heart
My soul
Shes got me in control
Consumes me whole...
I am, so consumed in her...
It's beautiful.
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2007-01-28 11:09:26]
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Re: Consumed.
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 11:55:26 AM AEST
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Oh BOY! have you got it bad !!!....
Very lovely feeling piece I liked it, but then I like most of your work I have read so far
Keep it up
Dee xx |
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Re: Consumed.
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by JoeyTrib1550 on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 12:23:35 PM AEST
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I really really like this!
I love the flow in this and the emotions you express, you can really feel them
beautiful write |
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Re: Consumed.
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by UrMyInspiration on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 03:33:06 PM AEST
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| Who is she? |
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Re: Consumed.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 05:12:29 PM AEST
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wow beautifully written and I love the wording this could be a love song.. awesome job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Consumed.
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by musicXisXlife on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 11:23:07 PM AEST
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Oohh..this is amazing. I really really like it.
Wish someone would write like this about me ; )
keep up the good work. |
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