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Mystery
Contributed by
sararose1950
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Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 10:01:24 AM in AEST
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Haiku
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darkness births twilght
a snake coiling inward bound
deaths abyss unfolds
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2007-01-28 10:01:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Mystery
(User Rating: 1 ) by silverscent on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 02:08:02 PM AEST (User
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Very dark haiku/senyru. I especially liked the snake refference. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Mystery
(User Rating: 1 ) by yangdantien on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 11:28:53 PM AEST (User
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This has the force of Anime of a martial battle as in Akira. Really well done.
Keep Posting.
Peace
Yang |
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