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Faerie
Contributed by
sararose1950
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Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 09:53:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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fae's dance in moonlight
lilting gentle sounds now fade
in whisps of light gone
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sararose1950
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2007-01-28 09:53:51]
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Re: Faerie
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by silverscent on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 02:11:19 PM AEST
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| Good job. I think for a first attempt this is a very good one. I will be honest :) and say "now" on the second line seems to be there purely to get the syllable count up. But other than that great job, keep it up!! |
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Re: Faerie
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 11:26:52 PM AEST
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Haiku from Findhorn what a blending of worlds. It has the punch of being written while on Fujiyama.
Well Done
Peace
Yang |
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Re: Faerie
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 03:04:02 AM AEST
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A very pretty haiku.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Faerie
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by Dizza_13 on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 02:22:34 AM AEST
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| lovely write. i dont know much haiku, but i enjoyed it all the same. |
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Re: Faerie
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 7th May 2014 @ 11:50:21 AM AEST
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| this is beautiful, hugs n' love nessa |
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