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The Sisters of the Seasons
Contributed by
kittycatsrock
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Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 08:17:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I am winter
I am the hot chocolate
The snow
The cold
And I am spring
I am the flower buds
The fresh warmth
The light breeze
And I, my friends, am summer
I am the long holidays
The cold ice creams
The buttercups and the daisies
And I, of course, am autumn
I am the golden leaves
The frosty mornings
The white mist
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Re: The Sisters of the Seasons
(User Rating: 1 ) by silverscent on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 02:15:03 PM AEST (User
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Nicely done. Personification of the seasons, what a great idea!!
I'll be honest though and say the winter stanza could do with a bit more...Maybe a log fire or something, because with the three cold images, the lone warm image seems odd...well that's how it read to me anyway lol
Good write though, keep it up. |
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