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Backwards Thinking
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 09:57:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Thinking
Isn't
Happen
Stance
Sometimes
Intellect
Harbours
Thought
Knowledge
Cannot
Undo
Feeling
Therefore
Involuntarily
Nullify
Mental
Anguished
Demons
Desperation
Often
Guarantees
~ Nazmythian ~
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
... [
2007-01-27 21:57:24]
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Re: Backwards Thinking
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 10:04:45 PM AEST
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Love the format. Like a lyrics on the back of an album (if your older than 35) that sparkle in special meaning. I love how the title of a poem ties into to its last line.
Well Done
Peace
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Re: Backwards Thinking
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 10:07:41 PM AEST
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Are you ok, Nazzy?
This sure is different for you. I also love the format, and also the font. It seems very blunt, and makes it seem rather formal.
I'm here for you if you need me.
*hugs
Phil xxx |
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Re: Backwards Thinking
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by MisfitMe on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 10:09:07 PM AEST
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Sorry, I could not honor your request to be, "ignored" as I too struggle w/ this...
Knowledge
Cannot
Undo
Feeling
It seems to me that it is logics fate to fail emotions...& still, our waking minds often pretend...
Thought provoking, I love that!
BigLove
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Re: Backwards Thinking
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by SaintzAndSinnerz on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 10:21:35 PM AEST
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| Very creative and well assembled. |
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Re: Backwards Thinking
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 10:46:57 PM AEST
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Brother, You the man. I like how you friggen did this. Reading backwards, I see you got some spillage coming out there. Sometimes I go out the back door and yell those words real damn loud, seems to help. (Of course Nazman I live in the country) If ya got neighbors close, I guess ya oughta stick to cleaverly gettin 'em down in a poem. Which by the way is stinging. Venting is good. You take care.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Backwards Thinking
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by Drapes on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 04:11:58 PM AEST
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| Okay, I am amazed, I love the hidden message, you've inspired me! -Drapes |
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Re: Backwards Thinking
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 04:47:52 PM AEST
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So much can be said in so little amount of words. Different from you Scott~ Like Phil I'm wondering is everything okay with you?
The good thing is that you able to pen down your emotions and get things off your chest.
You have many friends here who care for you.
All ears and a pm away. Wishing you much sunnier days ahead~
warm hugs n heartfelt prayers,
sue m |
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Re: Backwards Thinking
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 05:21:42 PM AEST
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I like the approach you took on this and this is a wonderful way to vent angry thoughts.. well expressed
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Backwards Thinking
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 10:50:20 PM AEST
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quite forward I thought and I agree completely. Whole heartedly. Like everyone else I'm wondering if this is just your muse or if something's wrong? It's very clever whatever it is...and I'm thinking of you.
mary |
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Re: Backwards Thinking
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by stillstitch on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 08:59:03 AM AEST
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Oh, that was different. I like this. I like the whimsical creativity of it. The typeface and line length and all that...what fun you have with words, my friend.
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Re: Backwards Thinking
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by Sagefairy on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 12:43:06 PM AEST
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Ouch. Sounds like a painful moment, but you worked it out most creatively. Hope it gets better, whatever it was. Take care.
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Re: Backwards Thinking
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 09:29:15 PM AEST
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sometimes .. you just gotta get it out, you know?
I love how you did this, dear poet. The backwards read,
coupled with the stanzas alone, set a powerful mood
here, dear snazzy. (I hope this helped to alleviate some
of whatever got your wound so tight). We are all kettles, no?
Sometimes we just have an excess that needs to be
"steamed" off! lol
ttocS raed ,uoy rof ereh syawlA!
Clever write, hun
~Breezy |
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