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{~♥~}Another Face{~♥~}
Contributed by
naughtygurl
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Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 09:09:03 PM in AEST
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Sometimes shadows speak to me,
And tell me things more comforting
The silhouette of a broken angel
Black roses line my coffin,
A disappearing act you’ll never forget
-Just a face in the crowd
Killing me on the inside
*Fading like a whisper in the cold December rain,
A breeze that eats at empty hearts
It once was said that all was dead,
But tell me this how can you and me exist,
I had it all, right at the palm of my hand
Now tell me that your only a face in the crowd.
Like a black vapor,
Poison that eats at an oozing sore
I’m not here only a memory
Like a scar that reminds
You vandalized your body
Screaming out to be somebody.
-Just another face in the crowd
DON’T LIE TO ME
*Fading like a whisper in the cold December rain,
A breeze that eats at empty hearts
It once was said that wall was dead,
But tell me this how can you and me exist,
I had it all, right at the palm of my hand
Now tell me that your only a face in the crowd.
You are just a fool ,
We will not survive
They feed us what we need to live
While cutting us up inside.
Just another lonely face, in an empty crowd
Copyright ©
naughtygurl
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2007-01-27 21:09:03]
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Re: {~♥~}Another Face{~♥~}
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 09:14:37 PM AEST
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I like this (man, do I love that picture!)
I could definitely see this being sung; so many songs on here, I look at them, and think 'who would wanna sing that?' but this one is really very good.
I really love the end, and the chorus. Both are done really well, and are actually pretty catchy. If it ever gets turned into a song, let me know ;)
*hugs*
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Re: {~♥~}Another Face{~♥~}
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 10:12:33 PM AEST
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This is like wow, the next hit for Norah Jones or the like. Really powerful and excellent.
Bravo
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: {~♥~}Another Face{~♥~}
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by inlovewithaladd on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 12:44:39 AM AEST
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| This has a punch to it, that nice zing of something really well written. what kind of music is this to? i'm having a hard time discerning a beat on paper! lol. |
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Re: {~♥~}Another Face{~♥~}
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by sadaddy on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 09:22:24 AM AEST
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This has a makings of a wonderful song. Would love to hear it put with music. Keep on writing you will one day be known for you works. May your heart be filled with peace and joy.
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