|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
Goodnight My Princess
Contributed by
EddieDean
on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 06:31:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
Its been a long Day,
I Rise to Leave,
But You ask me to Stay.
I lay next to You,
Holding you Close,
Listening to your Heartbeat,
Feeling your Warmth.
"I love you" you Say,
"I love you too" I Reply.
I kiss your Lips,
And You close your Eyes.
I lay next to You,
Watching you Sleep.
I Kiss your Eyes,
And begin to Weep.
Watching you Sleep,
In My Arms,
Dreaming your Dreams,
Here in My Arms.
Slowly I Stand,
And kiss you One More Time.
Before I Leave,
I cover you Up,
Kiss your Head,
And being to Leave.
"Goodnight My Princess,
I hope you Dream your Dreams,
And Dream of me Tonight"
Copyright ©
EddieDean
... [
2007-01-27 18:31:16] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Goodnight My Princess
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nitrosys on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 07:34:04 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I real nice poem tough it seems a bit to "normal" it miss this extra special touch |
|
|
Re: Goodnight My Princess
(User Rating: 1 ) by JoeyTrib1550 on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 12:43:42 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Well I like it
It's simple, tells a story and easily related to
I thought it was sweet
Like it, keep it up |
|
|
Re: Goodnight My Princess
(User Rating: 1 ) by MisfitMe on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 10:46:13 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Aaaaaaaaaaaaah, to love & be loved like this...a beautiful thing!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace
~MisfitMe |
|
|
Re: Goodnight My Princess
(User Rating: 1 ) by MandiLee on
Friday, 9th March 2007 @ 06:29:04 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
aww cute write mike! i love it! im guessing about your girlfriend im glad you've found happiness!
love always
MANDI |
|
|
Re: Goodnight My Princess
(User Rating: 1 ) by MandiLee on
Friday, 9th March 2007 @ 06:29:11 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
aww cute write mike! i love it! im guessing about your girlfriend im glad you've found happiness!
love always
MANDI |
|
|
Re: Goodnight My Princess
(User Rating: 1 ) by MandiLee on
Friday, 9th March 2007 @ 06:29:12 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
aww cute write mike! i love it! im guessing about your girlfriend im glad you've found happiness!
love always
MANDI |
|
|
Re: Goodnight My Princess
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jen_unknown_to_myself on
Tuesday, 18th December 2007 @ 12:17:30 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Its simple but says it all very well written sometimes if u make it complicated its hard to see the whole picture...sometimes its best to keep it simply beautiful.........great write as always
Finally learning to know myself
Jen |
|
|
|