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FEELINGS, THOUGHTS, FEARS.
Contributed by
dougnut
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Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 07:47:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I wish that I knew why I feel the way I do
It is so hard for me to describe
The thoughts In my mind bother me that is true
I can run away but its so hard to hide
I Often Feel Negative and Positive
2 Different people, The positive side in full view
I know It is not a great way to live
I hope the Lord will forgive "WHAT" ! wish I knew.
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dougnut
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2007-01-27 07:47:28]
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Re: FEELINGS, THOUGHTS, FEARS.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 11:14:30 AM AEST
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this is a wonderfully powerful expressive piece.. I can relate to this.. I always have these thoughts.. good and then bad.. I always worry so i can understand how you feel.. this is well put into words awesome job
vampyress Jenni
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Re: FEELINGS, THOUGHTS, FEARS.
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by Nitrosys on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 07:41:35 PM AEST
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| Really good and strong poem hope you find the "what" |
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Re: FEELINGS, THOUGHTS, FEARS.
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by Naughtygurl on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 09:14:26 PM AEST
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Its intresting, I think its slightly depressing though, not that im complaining I write alot of morbid depressing stuff as well. Anyway I like it, its just a little different in a good way.
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