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small town blues
Contributed by
aernby
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Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
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Small town rotting in the small town sun.
Wasted lives blowing down the Street
Like discarded newspapers:
Yesterday's news; Yesterday's bargains.
Blown by a wind that they do not know
Forsaken, unwanted rubbish
Left lying around until the Collector,
In his own good time, comes
To take them to the dump.
Copyright ©
aernby
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2003-02-21 17:20:00]
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Re: small town blues
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by shelby on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 12:18:29 PM AEST
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| I like this poem. Reminds me of where I grew up. Keep writing. |
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Re: small town blues
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 09:38:10 PM AEST
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Interesting poem, I also once wrote a poem about a small town.
keep writing, and if you haven't already...Move.
Jeff |
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Re: small town blues
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 11:41:45 PM AEST
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| interesting... gives one great images, wish it was longer; i likes:) hugs nessa |
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Re: small town blues
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 04:25:55 PM AEST
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Can I have a go at writing the other side of the coin............about my small town. I'll call it
"Small town news"
Gimme a couple of days and I'll post it on my page with a note that it was inspired by your poem |
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