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lost a promise
Contributed by
jessalynn
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Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 11:56:46 PM in AEST
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The promise has fallen out of my diamond
My room is cold
My bed is empty
Silence surrounds
The monsters lurk
Feeding on memories
The tears have fallen
The pain is out
Masks now cover
What is all about
Copyright ©
jessalynn
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2007-01-26 23:56:46]
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Re: lost a promise
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by dougnut on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 07:52:58 AM AEST
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Few Heartfelt words Spoke volumes to me
I can identify with MASKS
Thanks for sharing.
Doug
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Re: lost a promise
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 11:01:34 AM AEST
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wow this is a short but very emotional piece.. I really like the power this small piece portrays.. awesome job
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Re: lost a promise
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 01:53:44 PM AEST
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| Oh wow, very nice. I love the first line. I feel your pain through the words - keep writing! - Drapes |
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