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Unstoppable Force.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 10:13:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Bleeding from a heart that never dies
I crawl through the skies
transform in your eyes
come from within
free you from sin
purified
intensified
broken hearted
teary eyed
Dont know how I got...
Pulled away from you
now I cry alot,
And I know that you do too..
Now I know I have got...
To find a way back to you
And I swear to God I'm not...
ever givin up on you...
So inspire my eyes
Better me
make me twice as wise
our love is the light of a thousand fireflies
Hypnotize
Concentrate
Take my hand
Illuminate
we'll pentrate
the passion of life
your heart in mine
lets redefine...
everything that is beautiful.
Copyright ©
bleedthelove
... [
2007-01-26 10:13:36]
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Re: Unstoppable Force.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 10:19:59 AM AEST
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amazing write!! beauitful wording.. I especially love the ending.. great job
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Re: Unstoppable Force.
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by UrMyInspiration on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 11:56:16 AM AEST
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| Another beautiful poem from the one and only. |
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Re: Unstoppable Force.
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 04:04:50 PM AEST
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Beautiful sentiment along with true passion.
thank tou for your comment
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Re: Unstoppable Force.
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by JoeyTrib1550 on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 03:01:17 PM AEST
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Great write, liked it alot
Love the pictures you draw in my mind
Loved it |
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