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14.18.24.39.43.96.114
Contributed by
ferasdour
on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 12:00:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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i know not for what to call you
but to show as to the truth
i cannot speak your name as such
cause only as through
a name to touch
humanity will never no such truth
unless until you understand us
in instinctive inspiration i'm immobilized
within thoughts of the minds of two
Copyright ©
ferasdour
... [
2007-01-26 00:00:51]
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Re: 14.18.24.39.43.96.114
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 04:29:52 PM AEST
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You've an interesting style; I'll be interested to see it continue to develop. You could sometimes benefit from a spell-check, however.
Keep it up.
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Re: 14.18.24.39.43.96.114
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by ferasdour on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 07:58:56 PM AEST
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yeah, it doesn't help that many times i will misspell stuff as to reference thing, as well as misspelling other stuff.
you just NEVER know (one of the few times i say NO riddles) |
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Re: 14.18.24.39.43.96.114
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 5th April 2007 @ 10:03:12 PM AEST
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This was good. Creative and interesting. I liked the title. We all have our secrets and some are easier to admit then others. Great poem.
Take care
Christina |
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