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Wayward Little Girl
Contributed by
haku
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Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 03:44:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Little girl someone has left you alone.
You were lying there cast out,
chilled to the bone.
When I found you sleeping so angelic,
you were sleeping on a park bench,
an old feeble green relic.
How could this beauty wind up here?
Unmistakeable reflection in her eyes,
I saw only ice cold fear.
How did you become deposited,
where you lay?
Has your cardboard box decayed away?
Haku
Copyright ©
haku
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2002-07-29 15:44:00]
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Re: Wayward Little Girl
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by chatabox on
Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 09:41:15 PM AEST
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Way too sad, I cant bear it.
I try to pretend this doesnt go on, but of course it does....none of us can be that blind.
excellant ! |
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Re: Wayward Little Girl
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 03:04:49 AM AEST
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Excellent write, Gregg. This is so true, and so sad. I wish more people would be aware of and do something about it.
Hugs,
Jenni |
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Re: Wayward Little Girl
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by orgygirl on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 04:21:04 AM AEST
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| awwwww.. this is so sad but it does happen everyday..... nice write :0) |
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Re: Wayward Little Girl
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by Haku on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 10:23:20 AM AEST
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Hi Jenni,
How are you? Better I hope. This new site is a little different.
I found my post on the seventh page! I don't know about this.
Thanks for your support as always. From my sand to your shores,
Gregg |
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