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When I Breathe.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:39:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It's not my style
It's not my way
To see the future
In shades of grey
It's only pain
And please believe
i dont decieve
it only hurts when i breathe
hear me calling
catch me falling
in love
so in love with you
immensely
intensely
break me
shake me
im breaking
im shaking
invoke me
provoke me
choke me
the life outta me
take a look
a good look and see
you left a hole in my chest
right where my heart should be
place my bets
no regrets
did all i coulda did
give all that i can give
and yes i forgive
its just how i live
the best of a friend
until the end
cuz its not my style
its not my way
to hurt my true love in any way
i wont cause u pain
and please believe
cuz i dont decieve...
dont worry,
it only hurts when i breathe....
it only hurts when i breathe.
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2007-01-25 11:39:39]
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Re: When I Breathe.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:45:29 AM AEST
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this is a great expressed piece.. I like the flow alot and especially the ending.. its a very powerful straightforward emotion on loss of love.. very well written
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Re: When I Breathe.
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:45:58 AM AEST
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You prooved a point LOVE HURTS!
be safe x
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Re: When I Breathe.
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by UrMyInspiration on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:56:35 AM AEST
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Aww... Sad. You redefine every word you speak through your amazing poetry.
Im lucky to know you. |
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Re: When I Breathe.
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by eazy6886 on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 03:56:15 PM AEST
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WOW!!! I'm Lost for words.
VERY VERY Great write!!!
Expression Love doesn't come better than this. |
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