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Love's Dilemma
Contributed by
Winterland
on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 10:19:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Since in the Spring
I've held you near.
The past few months
have become so dear.
We are linked,
entwined together.
Breath and blood,
we'll share forever.
And yet my heart
does ache so.
What to do
I just don't know.
Do I fight
to keep you here,
through all the pain
I know we'll feel,
Or do I simply
hold you close,
give the rest of my heart
and let you go?
Copyright ©
Winterland
... [
2007-01-25 10:19:37]
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Re: Love's Dilemma
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by Bleedthelove on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 10:49:39 AM AEST
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| Sad. But beautifully written. |
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Re: Love's Dilemma
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:50:03 AM AEST
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beautifully written.. I like the flow and how this is a straightforward poem.. so full of life and passion this is!.. and as for the ending question.. you have to ask yourself.. is that worth getting hurt? this is a nicely written piece though
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Re: Love's Dilemma
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by UrMyInspiration on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 12:55:41 PM AEST
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| This is very sad... Wonderfully written. |
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