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In Darkness Light
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
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Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 11:15:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You are eager to write to me
But I sense you forgot who to be
Draw the curtains, shut out the light
Be at peace like the dark of night
See the picture who you are
Leave in distant all that mar
Do it again but do it right
All you treasure is in sight
Now take each step make it small
Arch your back stand very tall
Be so proud of who you are
And all will seek you from afar
Friday, 11 January 2002
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2007-01-24 23:15:10]
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Re: In Darkness Light
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by SavagePoet on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 11:28:29 PM AEST
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Wow Gee you really know how to touch the heart strings. Very strong under current message.
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Re: In Darkness Light
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:39:33 AM AEST
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wow a very inspiring write for your young one.. I hope it helped. depression can be hard for people to deal with.. this is a very hopeful write and nice stanzas
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: In Darkness Light
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 04:52:15 PM AEST
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You Go TigerDaddy...what lucky cubs you have, sweetie.
Great job!
~me |
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