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Questions
Contributed by
complcated_complications
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Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 02:02:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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I am in a place where i can't move,
Yet fly freely in my mind.
I enter this place I call my thoughts
And this is what I find...
You;
The source of my confusion
The answers to all my questions
The object of my affection
The reason for complication...
I don’t know how you feel...
Where would I find the answers?
You are my happiness....
Why can’t I be yours?
You say “I like you....”
Then disappear...
Then tell me “I miss you...”
Yet stay away....
I don’t know what to do!
Where do I go from here?
I only want to be happy...
Why don’t you see that?
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Re: Questions
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 02:05:56 PM AEST
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Written very well. Your expression of sincere feelings is moving. Yes I relate to these things as well as many others will understand it as well. I hope your search will soon be over and the light will show you the answers in which you seek.
Michelle |
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Re: Questions
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by Bleedthelove on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 04:55:20 PM AEST
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| Then tell me "I miss you" yet stay away......that line hits me deep. Good job. Nicely written. |
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